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Nicole Ritterbusch (Göttingen)
George Steven's A Place in the Sun and Jack Clayton's The Great
Gatsby Short-by-shot: a computer-assisted comparison
In the context of a scientific film examination, the underlying
analytical and interpretational steps should be made on verifiable
grounds. This becomes especially important, when the subject
requires a look at a film adaptation of a novel on the one hand
and its literary source on the other. It is necessary to find a
method for a comparison that suits both media forms - it is
exemplified as an interdisciplinary, computer-based approach as
described in this article.
As opposed to the first subjective viewing of a film under
the conditions of the movie-theatre - dark room, uninterrupted
reception, collective sharing of impressions - the topic at issue
involves a rational film reconstruction through repeated viewing.
Access to the film in the form of a videotape and the use of a
video cassette recorder (VCR) is therefore one of the primary
technical requirements. Since a film of average length contains about 500 to 1000 shots, the use of a personal computer (PC) - the second technical necessity - is suited to an economical processing for the abundant data presented here. Whereas in the mean
time literary studies (and linguistic studies as well) make habitual and regular use of the PC for economical and analytical reasons, the work at film
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analyses based on computers - at least at German universities -
seems to be restricted to the development of cost-intensive hard
and software sets by special departments only. Braunschweig and
Marburg are to be mentioned here. The use of the PC plus common
programs, however, enables a potentially larger set of users to
work in this field. If a video capture-board is added to the
equipment, stills and moving images can be digitalised by linking
the computer with the VCR.
Having a whole history of their own, filmic adaptations of
novels (and dramas) form a specific area of film in general and
therefore require an equally specific approach. More and more they
have freed themselves from the premise of "adequacy of adaptation"
they were judged by up to the 1970s, sometimes even in the present
time. Bearing the semiological approach in mind, the request for a
structural or plot-wise point-to-point resemblance is replaced by
the question of function within the film's operating system of
codes.
Literaturverfilmung ist die Transformation des aus dem
literarischen Text ermittelten Textsystems (nicht die
Transformation des wortsprachlich-literarischen Textes
in das Zeichensystem des Films). (Schneider 1981:8)
[A literary adaptation is the transformation of the text system
drawn from the literary text into the notation of the film -
author's transl.]
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The status of a filmic adaptation as a medium operating
independently from its literal source thus serves as the
analytical basis from which questions regarding both the written
and the filmed work are to be developed.
In a reversal of the traditional step "from book to film",
the film has become an important mediator of literature. According
to recent surveys, not only at German schools and universities
classical literature is known to students more via film than via a
literature (Buchloh/Becker/Schröder 1985: 133), which alone could be reason enough for a closer look at the style of filming.
Moreover, through an extensive use of VCRs, the reception volume
of films has increased, which also brought about a change in
audience habits. Finally, the most important reason from an
analytical point of view can be seen in the high level of
mediation of both novel and film, since the influencing of each
other seems to constitute a recurring part in the history of both
media. An interdisciplinary comparison therefore is meant to throw
an illuminating look at the underlying narrational and
presentational modes, before it deals with thematical questions.
The main goal of a systematic film analysis is to make
the filmic interpretation "wiederholbar, nachvollziehbar
und nachprüfbar."
[repeatable, comprehensible, verifiable - author's transl.]
(Weber/Friedl 1988: 246)
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While the examination of the novel can be exemplified with the
text and the respective pages, the filmic medium is not directly
accessible in this way. The analysis therefore requires a thorough
preparation. Every sound film consists of different narrational,
presentational layers. Plot, action, figure interaction, dialogue,
music, mise-en-scène, lighting, visual imagery - plus special effects or certain genre conventions not considered here - are all connected in order to produce the specific meaning of the medium (simultaneous design).
The film transcript
Editing provides the key for the analysis, since the film's components such as scenes, segments and sequences are formed
by single shots (linear, successive design). A shot-by-shot film-transcipt records the screened information. As a precise model for
a later description of filmic details and for a quick re-orientation throughout the film, the film-transcript displays a table with eight columns, presenting the serial number of shots, the serial length, the duration of each shot in seconds, the framing
of the image and the camera movement, the description of the ongoing action, the dialogue and the musical score plus sounds (Buchloh 1980).
The table-model at issue provides the highest possible information
in the smallest possible number of columns. Since it is meant to
describe, not to interpret, its entries need to be as objective as
possible. The form corresponds to the different layers in operation.
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The film-transcript thus provides information about the
film's structure, its design and style. Especially important in
this respect is the time factor. It shows the length of each shot
in seconds - it marks suspense climaxes (fast succession of cuts)
as well as extended periods of time (slow succession of cuts). If
the time-data are taken separately, the linear course of the film
can be presented in a shot-length diagram. With the duration of
each shot in seconds filled in vertically and the seriel number
filled in horizontally, the filmic course of time and the editing
pace can be viewed at a glance. With several films at issue,
different styles in the unfolding of the action may evolve.
Stills
Film critics occasionally point to the possible problems implied
in a fragmentary reproduction and reception of filmic images:
Wie 'denken' wir eigentlich Filmbilder? Wenn wir von
ihnen sprechen, behandeln wir ihre Elemente, die sich
uns zu einem Inhalt fügen, der, irgendwie, Sprache
werden kann, als wären sie ungerahmt wie die Bilder
eines Traums. [...] Das Standbild ist schon eine 'Übersetzung' des Filmbildes, und um wieviel mehr ist
es dann die im Ausschnitt bearbeitete Fassung im
Print-Medium. Trotzdem behandeln wir das gedruckte
Bild als 'Bild aus dem Film' und als wäre es wirkliches
Zitat und nicht Repräsentanz. So beginnt unsere
Fahrlässigkeit." (Seeßlen 1993:16)
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[How do we 'think' the film's images? Speaking of
them, we treat their elements, which for us form a
content, which, somehow, could become language,
as if they were unframed as images in a dream...
The still already is a 'translation' of the film picture
and how much more then it is the partly worked upon
edition in the printed medium. Nevertheless, we treat
the printed image as the 'image taken from the film'
and as if it were a real quote and not a representative.
Thus our negligence begins. (author's transl.)]
It has thus to be re-emphasized that a still presents just one
part in the whole system of the filmic process. Technically, a
film consists of single shots and a film analysis - in a similar
way as with novel analysis - breaks up the whole work into the
different layers in order to point out specific techniques and
effects. In addition to the camera work, dialogue, music, mise-en-
scène, etc., digitalised stills drawn from the film specific
points enrich both the analysis and the interpretation by
illustrating the film's method of character presentation, figure
interaction and the use of visual leitmotifs, as is referred to in
the given example (see still from A Place in the Sun).
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As far as the surface structure of a film is concerned,
visual devices such as chapters or headlines usually found in a
written text, are obviously missing. Nevertheless a visual
ordering of plot and story events does take place. By relating
exclusively on the films technical/visual devices - on filmic
"punctuation marks" such as dissolves, double-dissolves, fade-ins
and fade-outs, wipes etc. - the film's arrangement of the plot can
be re-drawn. As lager items, these comprise sets of scenes,
segments and sequences.
Dreiser and Fitzgerald
George Stevens Oscar-winning film A Place in the Sun is based on Theodore Dreiser's An American Tragedy - starring Elisabeth Taylor and Montgomery Clift. Ahead of The Red Badge of Courage,
An
American in Paris and Death of a Salesman, Steven's picture is chosen as the best film of its production year (1951) by the American National Board of Review. A Streetcar named Desire follows in place six. The "best film ever to come out
of Hollywood" (Silke 1964/65:15) is awarded six oscars that year. In the following decades, the audience seemed to forget about it,
whereas the novel succeeded to win back its status as a
masterpiece. Praised for his critical depiction of American
society in 1925, Dreiser immediately sold the film rights to the
Famous Players (later Paramount) for $ 90.000. With Eisenstein
working on the script, but being dismissed by the production
company for political reasons, von Sternberg took over the
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direction of the 1931-released adaptation, which finally failed at
the box-office. The importance of Dreiser as a naturalistic
spokesman and of his work in the literary canon of the 1920s was
not acknowledged until the late forties.
The second film takes up one of the best-known pieces of
American literature of the 1920s. F. Scott Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby established itself as an immediate success in its
publishing year of 1925 and credited its author once more with
being the spokesman of the jazz age. Two years later Hollywood
turned out a silent film version, which was followed by a second
adaptation in 1949, presenting the box-office magnet Alan Ladd in
the lead. Months before the opening of the Jack Clayton-film in
1974, this production was advertised by a huge campaign. The
built-up expectations - mainly for a major romance - could not be
reached. The film flopped both at the box-office and at critical
reception. Nevertheless, a re-examination in the context of this
analysis credits it as a thoroughly structured and very well
produced film with the potential of a classic.
Thematically seen, similar kind of questions can be applied to
both novels and their chosen adaptations - the success-theme, the
socio-critical context, the question of identity and triangular
relationships in the case of An American Tragedy and A Place in the Sun and the historical context of the American Dream, the meaning of the past and the money-defined relationships as well as the notion of the city theme in the case of both
Gatsby versions.
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Closely linked with questions of content, aspects of the film form
are - in analogy to novel analysis - of special importance here.
In the manifold system of the film
every component functions within the overall pattern
that is perceived. Thus we shall treat as formal
elements many things that some people consider
content. (Bordwell/Thompson 1986:25)
Stylistical and narrational principles of the same novel and film,
of the presentation of the story in place and time form the centre
of interest here. The film's "narration" is defined as a process,
as an activity of collecting and arranging "story material in
order to achieve specific time-bound effects on a perceiver."
(Bordwell 1985:xi) Questions of point of view as well as figure
characterisation are constitutive within this process. With regard
to the overall structure of the film, the repeated use of certain
motifs should be given special attention. Filmic motifs occur on
different levels:
We shall call any significant repeated element in a
film a motif. A motif may be an object, a color, a
person, a sound, or even a character trait. We may
call a pattern of lighting or camera position a motif
if it is repeated through the course of a film.
(Bordwell/Thompson 1986:37)
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Often enough, it is in the exposition that the various motifs are
carefully presented. Almost with psychological necessity the
exposition thus becomes the criterion for the viewer. Seen in
retrospective, it gives the film its visual and thematical frame,
as the given examples will illustrate.
Visual information
The exposition of A Place in the Sun emphasizes the film's visual information. A young man (George Eastman) is introduced
immediately as the protagonist. At the end of the establishing
shot, the camera zooms up to his face in a close-up. With the
character apparently appearing out of nowhere this procedure
creates a curious tension for the figure's "story." The oversized
bill-board "It's an Eastman" is set up as an indicator for the
unfolding of the filmic narration. It directs the hitcher George
directly to Eastman himself, the head of the swim-suit factory.
As one of the film's leading visual symbols, it is connected with
the main theme of the protagonist's persistent pursuit of the
American Dream. Morally and socially encoded conventions
are neglected for romantic reasons, which leads to an
inevitably tragic end.
Visually the hitch-hiker George and the rich-looking woman in
the cream-colored luxury-convertible (Angela Vickers) are related
to each other in a predictable way. Photographed from a medium
distance as she disappears quickly from view, her driving past is
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accentuated by the sound of a horn. The camera follows her from
George's perspective, when he looks inquisitively after her.
Although Angela is not to reappear in connection with George until
much later in the film, her importance as a character is
emphasized here. Stylistically, she is associated with the woman
from the bill-board. Even at this early stage, she can already be
seen as the personification of a glamour advertisement. Angela
Vickers is a representative of the high-society George longs to
enter. Consequently, the next scenes will present the setting as
the milieu of the rich branch of the Eastman family.
Musical themes
The Great Gatsby establishes various musical themes. The musical score opens with Irving Berlin's sentimental "What'll I do", and then changes to a popular song, from there to Charleston
music to change again to a specific instrumental theme that
underlies the display of several photographs - always of the same
woman: Daisy, as the spectators are to learn later. A sense of the
past is established here by the combination of music and images.
While the music, accompanied by the laughter of an imaginary
party-crowd, seems to echo through the great empty halls, a fly
crawls over a piece of half-eaten bread. All musical motifs are to
reappear in the course of the film - each in connection with
special characters and topics. When Gatsby, for example, actually
meets his desired woman, Daisy, much later in the film, the
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instrumental "Daisy-theme" starts again, recalling the melancholy
connotations set out in the exposition. It characterises the
relationship between the two that is based on a desire to recreate
the past. The visual imagery of the re-encounter heightens this
interpretation. Daisy's and Gatsby's recognizing glances are
refracted through a mirror and both figures are seen by Nick from
in front of a window where they appear set in a frame, static as
in a picture.
Shot-length diagrams
A comparative look at the shot-length of both films and the film
transcript would indicate that a succession of short shot-lengths
is linked with an accelerated action, whereas long shot-lengths
point to an emphasis on figure interaction and staged dialogue.
Peak durations of shots in A Place in the Sun can be found in the first third of the film - they all present the long extended, static and presumably "unexciting" meetings of George and Alice, the factory-worker he is dating until Angela Vickers be
comes interested in him. The film's editing pace is accelerated in the various meetings with her, the woman from the upper-class. The subjective, psychological time now also moves faster, since Alice was drowned and the moment of George's arrest is coming
inevitably closer.
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The Great Gatsby, however, is cut faster in the first half.
It builds up to the meeting of Gatsby and Daisy - the meeting
itself being presented in a rather long shot and followed by a
short period of accelerated action. Soon after the re-encounter
though, the film's pace changes. It is slowed down in recurrent
conversations about Daisy's marriage to Tom Buchanan. Even the
social gathering at Gatsby's party takes place in long durating
shots. It seems to be halted by the problems of the triangular
relationship. The Wilson sub-plot, having been interwoven with the
actions of the main characters by Tom Buchanan's affair with
Myrtle Wilson, develops into an independent theme, when in the
longest shot of the film (shot 649) George Wilson decides to take
vengeance for the murder of his wife.
Conclusion
As has been illustrated, a detailed record of a film provides the
basis for an objective approach to the subject. It not only serves
as a means for a re-orientation through the course of the film,
but underlies a systematic analysis of its structure and presented
themes. Therefore, it has proven to be indispensible in the
context of an interdisciplinary comparison, although it shouldn|t
be regarded as a representation of the filmic medium. It makes no
claim to serve as a substitute for the moving image.
The transmission of some of the table data into a diagram
offers a useful examination of the film's linear development.
Other diagrams can be constructed in this connection, whose form
would differ from the presented one - e.g. of the figure
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interaction, of the meetings of single characters or of the
connection of a certain musical score with a theme or a person. In
addition to the screening, the film's meaning is constituated to a
large part in the mind of its recipients - a process comparable to
the act of reading and its underlying motivations:
The practice of cinema is only possible through the
perceptual passions: the desire to see (= scophic
drive, scopophilia, voyeurism) [...] and the desire
to hear. (Winkler 1992:47)
Seen from this perspective, the film transcript functions as a
mediator in the interplay between film and viewer.
Appendix: diagrammes
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